2.87 - April 29th, 2013, 8:09 am
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[Posted by Misteen on April 29th, 2013, 8:17 am]

Sorry for making you wait >_<
This time I'm not really confident about my drawings, I hope next page will explain better the action of this page.
In the last panel there is a sound effect I'm not able to translate. It's the sound of "moving ground" or something similar, how do you say it in English? : >

>Groudonkid: Sure! ^ ^ It says "orderly", so Plusle and Minun are not generals of some element.

>Cres0055: Thank you so much, I'm glad you like it ^ ^ I was so happy to read your comment. I hope to keep an interesting story!

A few pages more and the mistery behind the couple will be unfold ^ ^



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[Posted by Manga-Ka on April 29th, 2013, 10:34 am]

DIIIIIIIIIIIIIG!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! 8'''D



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[Posted by SmackJeevesNinja (Guest) on April 29th, 2013, 12:10 pm]

For the sound effect, perhaps go for "rumble." It is associated with earthquakes or rockfalls. You could always make up your own or use the original onomatopoeia written in romanji.



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...Was that a Substitute? [Posted by Miyto (Guest) on April 29th, 2013, 3:01 pm]

Or, no, that was a 'dig'.
Though those two kids are to be pitied I think, two siblings that have removed the support from the regular rivalry.
I hope Lyla keeps the blue one around long enough for the sibling-related scarring to fade.
Though I do think the 'swip' is the right initial sound effect, next frame however I expect something akin to a 'rumble'



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[Posted by Groudonkid (Guest) on April 30th, 2013, 7:44 pm]

Thank you for the translation.
Don't worry about your artwork, it's already far above average and I for one always find it enjoyable.
How did the hole get behind Plusle if Lyla was in front of her in the beginning though?
You've also mentioned that the protagonists are infused with small pieces of your personality. Does this hold true for the antagonists as well? Or does their inspiration come from elsewhere?



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[Posted by HKim on May 5th, 2013, 1:44 am]

I don't know why you're not confident. Your artwork is fantastic!

Clean lines, readable dialogue, cohesive colors...

I'm no artist, but I think your overall work is amazing.



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AHH I LOVE THIS SO MUCH [Posted by GONE on May 9th, 2013, 7:49 pm]

I really love your style and the way you colour! I saw some spelling errors but I stoped pointing them out because I felt like a douchebag.



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[Posted by cres0055 on June 2nd, 2013, 1:19 pm]

I agree with HKim your art is great. I like how you did their expression in the second panel. Then great job on the last panel with the grass and the smoke.



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[Posted by Guest on July 25th, 2014, 8:14 pm]

I've been lurking on this comic for a long time. I'ms orry I haven't commented before.

But this comic is fantastic!!!


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