2.74 - February 10th, 2013, 9:43 am
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[Posted by Misteen on February 10th, 2013, 9:43 am]

Rica's battle is over. I hope the transition wasn't too blurt...

I wrote the Ren/Rica's "chapter" while under pressure so I guess I didn't do a really smooth job with dialogues and scenario... (there are some mistakes in drawings as well...) So I'm gonna correct and revision everything when the whole chapter is over.

Next act is Lyla vs Toomi (Plusle) and Kazuya (Minun).
I hope you enjoy it >_<)

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>Silver: Thank you so much ^ ^ Yes, painballs do wiggle but the Ren's one won't open again.

>Silvermoon123: Thank you!! ^ ^ A human with a general mark should be something new for Sorrows, let's see how it develops : D

>Groudonkid: Thank you so much for your detailed explanation!! It also is very helpful for me too (in next chapter there will be first "scientific" explanations indeed). I haven't questions right now, but thank you for your help ^ ^
Tranformation into Sorrow let the powers from the Pokemon intact, so a ghost type will be able to phase through object and all the rest.

>randompersonwholovethiscomic: Thank you so much!! Your comment gave me lot of motivation >w< I hope you enjoy future developments as well ^ ^



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[Posted by Manga-Ka on February 10th, 2013, 10:55 am]

Interesting :')
hm.... I wonder what a ditto would look like as this x'D



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[Posted by Groudonkid (Guest) on February 10th, 2013, 11:10 am]

I'm glad my explanation was helpful to you, I kept getting the nagging feeling in the back of my mind that I had missed something while I was writing it.
Although I really enjoyed the Ren vs Rica battle, I'm gald to finally be able to see your other characters again.
I had some trouble reading this page, I hope you don't mind if I suggest some corrections. "Who's the moron that's going around biting teachers?" "You were insufferable with a pikachu as a partner, but now some fool's gone and made you into one yourself!" (I'm suggesting this particular change because as far as I know, in order for Lyla to be a regular sorrow she would have had to be infected by a pikachu-sorrow,not her own pikachu. And the sorrows supposedly don't quite know about the anti-sorrows yet.) "Is appearing wherever your unwanted a talent of your's or something?" (or) "Why is it that you always appear whenever your least wanted?" (Unfortunately, I have no idea what the last speech bubble is saying.)
Whew, that was a lot of typing...
Speaking of the anti-sorrows though. I was wondering if since the pokemon are combined with their trainers as sorts of suits, would that make them look any different from regular sorrows? I would love to see an anti-sorrow nidoking! I have a feeling that it would be awesome.



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[Posted by Mint612 on February 10th, 2013, 7:12 pm]

Seems like they know each other.Maybe... rivals?



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[Posted by miyto (Guest) on February 11th, 2013, 4:28 am]

@Groudonkid:
Out of curiosity did you read this left-to-right? (I often forget which comic is which direction, I may read too many comics...)
The panel orientations hint that it is that direction.
But, when I first read this comic I thought that can't be right, then I reread it right-to-left and the grammar fit better.
"Who's the moron..."
"You and your Pikachu..."
"No, it was you who did it, weren't* you?"
"After all isn't your..."
"Do we know each other?"

*one correction I would use 'weren't you?' instead of 'wasn't you?'

edit:
@Misteen aside from the layout temporarily confusing me and the one typo, I think this page is one of the better introductory taunts.
Is that plusle the same kid Lyla beat in chapter 1?


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