2.66 - December 23rd, 2012, 12:21 pm
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[Posted by Misteen on December 23rd, 2012, 12:38 pm]

That's why she is in Anti Sorrow special squad.
As said in previous chapter, all girls were chosen because their Pokemon were somewhat stronger than others.
Rica's Scyther's special feature is extremely rapid speed.

>Groudonkid: Pokemon were in the same room with their trainers and listened to what the plan was. None of them refused, then they agreed. As specified in first chapter Pokemon were turned into something you can wear, so they were just condensated into a battle suit. At the same time they lies within the trainer, and trainers showed some kind of reaction: Cherry moved around her Steelix tail like she was new to have one and the others as well. Maybe there wasn't enough space for Pokemon's reactions but honestly I didn't think it was necessary and then it would have taken too much space. Obviously It was just my choice and if it caused confusion with the story that's my bad >_> Pokemon were not shocked by tranformation because as Steelix got arms and legs, Cherry got a tail and a heavy armour. FOH is not about their trasformation so I thought I could cut it short. (But I'm aware that with everything I write and draw I could make tons of mistakes >_>)I hope not to have sounded somewhat arrogant with this answer, it's just my point of view.

>miyto: good to hear : D

>Hkim: Thank you so much! I appreciated : )


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[Posted by pfenix on December 23rd, 2012, 1:07 pm]

@Misteen: Errm, just a few things about this page? Dialogue doesn't seem to flow as well as I would like...

"I told you were wrong" should be "I told you. You were wrong." or "I told you that you were wrong."

And "My scyther's speed exceeds that of bolt" could be "...of lightning." IDK. Flow.



[Posted by Groudonkid (Guest) on December 23rd, 2012, 1:21 pm]

Sorry for all the trouble I caused with my questioning. You didn't actually make any errors, I just tend to focus on the pokemon viewpoint since that is what generally interests me the most.

I really like this latest comic, you seem to have put extra effort into the "dramatic" feel of it. You may want to change your wording however.
It should be: "I told you, you were wrong"
And the rest of the monologue might read better as: "There is no unfailing attack... My Sycther's speed exceeds that of Lightning." Or: "There is no attack... that my Scyther's speed, cannot dodge!"

That being said, I would like to point out that, that is one incredibly fast Scyther!
Thank you for your work Misteen! XD


[Posted by Groudonkid (Guest) on December 23rd, 2012, 1:23 pm]

@pfenix: Hey! You posted while I was typing!


[Posted by miyto (Guest) on December 24th, 2012, 2:39 am]

I think the giving of questions, is asking for the background of the author's world. Therefore, both the readers and author will get more out of this world by asking about things that Misteen has yet to consider!
So long as we ask questions that are enjoyable to answer, I think everybody wins

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