2.55 - November 6th, 2012, 2:38 am
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[Posted by Misteen on November 6th, 2012, 2:42 am]

I tried my best with English in this page. Is it ok?
Btw the sillier the better lol

>Senji Q: You sensed right, I'm trying to have updates more regularly ^ ^

First battle: Scyther vs Luxray



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English [Posted by Blitz3124 on November 6th, 2012, 4:11 pm]

@Misteen: where he says "GRRAAH! I HOPE YOUR HAIR TO NEVER SHINE AGAIN!" it should be:
your hair never shines again!"
everything else is perfect :3

(just saying, if u ever need help designing any poke characters :3 )



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[Posted by Kisarafox on November 6th, 2012, 7:57 pm]

@English: You should make it the full sentence so the author can understand and not be confused. Just saying you know how sometimes people who don't know grammar well make mistakes like what Luxray said and people tell them how it should be said completely like

"GRRAAH! I HOPE YOUR HAIR TO NEVER SHINE AGAIN!"

Write it out in whole:

"GRRAAH! I HOPE YOUR HAIR NEVER SHINES AGAIN!"

What you said was correct but the author worked hard in creating the story and trying their best with English, lets be helpful by righting out the whole thing instead of just what needs to be corrected so it's basically copying and pasting.

That's how I feel anyway.

@Misteen: Excellent page; I loved Luxray's reaction XD I'm actually upset you didn't show Scyther tearing up his clothes...or did I miss that in the previous pages? Urgh I gotta go reread everything...luckily I have all the time in the world!


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